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2018-07-26 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

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Dear Teacher Charry, ^_^ Thank you for your concern. Your words were a great comfort. I also want to be friends. >_< Why do so many people love to travel these days? Explain your answer in not more than ten (10) sentences. Travel ... I want to go too, but I can't. I think there are two reasons for the opposite. The first is that people can afford. In the past, travel itself was burdensome. This is due to the lack of money. Now We have extra money besides food, clothing, and shelter. Second, life is too hard. We are constantly busy at work. So we want to get out of our daily routine. A proper trip will heal our life.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]! ^_^
I\'m glad to hear that I was able to help you out in a very small way.

I\'m also happy to know that you want to be friends with me. :)
I agree to your answers on our essay question.

It\'s because those are my main reasons for travelling.

Anyhow, I hope someday you would find the time to do it.

You deserve it for always working hard.

Sleep tight my dear.

See you again tomorrow. ^^

~Teacher Charry :)

Dear Teacher Charry, ^_^

>> CORRECT!
Thank you for your concern.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> I appreciate your concern.

Your words were a great comfort.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> Your words have comforted me.

I also want to be friends. >_<
>>
I also want us to be friends. >_<
Why do so many people love to travel these days? Explain your answer in not more than ten (10) sentences. 
Travel ... I want to go too, but I can\'t.

>> I want to go travel too, but I can\'t.
I think there are two reasons for the opposite.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> I think there are two reasons why people do it.
The first is that people can afford.

>> The first (reason) is that, people can afford it.
In the past, travel itself was burdensome.

>> In the past, traveling itself was burdensome.

OR >> In the past, going on a travel itself was burdensome.
This is due to the lack of money.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> This is because of financial constraints.
Now We have extra money besides food, clothing, and shelter.

>> Now we have extra money besides for food, clothing, and shelter.
Second, life is too hard.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> The second reason is that, life is too difficult.

We are constantly busy at work.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> We are always busy with our work.
So we want to get out of our daily routine.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> That\'s why we want to escape our daily routine.
A proper trip will heal our life.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> A proper trip will heal our bruised souls.

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