HOMEWORK! ^^
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]! ^_^
I\'m glad to hear that I was able to help you out in a very small way.
I\'m also happy to know that you want to be friends with me. :)
I agree to your answers on our essay question.
It\'s because those are my main reasons for travelling.
Anyhow, I hope someday you would find the time to do it.
You deserve it for always working hard.
Sleep tight my dear.
See you again tomorrow. ^^
~Teacher Charry :)
Dear Teacher Charry, ^_^
>> CORRECT!
Thank you for your concern.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I appreciate your concern.
Your words were a great comfort.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Your words have comforted me.
I also want to be friends. >_<
>> I also want us to be friends. >_<
Why do so many people love to travel these days? Explain your answer in not more than ten (10) sentences.
Travel ... I want to go too, but I can\'t.
>> I want to go travel too, but I can\'t.
I think there are two reasons for the opposite.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I think there are two reasons why people do it.
The first is that people can afford.
>> The first (reason) is that, people can afford it.
In the past, travel itself was burdensome.
>> In the past, traveling itself was burdensome.
OR >> In the past, going on a travel itself was burdensome.
This is due to the lack of money.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> This is because of financial constraints.
Now We have extra money besides food, clothing, and shelter.
>> Now we have extra money besides for food, clothing, and shelter.
Second, life is too hard.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> The second reason is that, life is too difficult.
We are constantly busy at work.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> We are always busy with our work.
So we want to get out of our daily routine.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> That\'s why we want to escape our daily routine.
A proper trip will heal our life.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> A proper trip will heal our bruised souls.
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