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I want to join a group of club.But I don't have personal material.
Although I join it.We learn about systems.One of them is railroad system.these days our science technology developed.
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I want to join a group of club.
>> I want to join a group.
>> or: I want to join a club.
But I don\'t have personal material.
>> But I don\'t have a personal material.
Although I join it.
>> Although I joined the group.
We learn about systems. One of them is railroad system.
>> We learn about systems and one of them is railroad system.
these days our science technology developed.
>> Our science technology is developing these days.
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