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Homework : How much do you usually spend on shopping? Please explain.
If I have enough money, I spend a long time on shopping.
>>If I have enough money, I will spend it by shopping for a long time.
It takes two to three hours.
CORRECT!
or>>It will take me two to three hours to shop.
But in opposite situation, I often finsih shopping more quickly.
>>But in a totally different situation, I often finish shopping more quickly.
In first situaition, I buy the clothes that fascinates me although I didn\'t thought buying these types.
>>Going back to the initial situation, I would buy clothes that fascinate me. Even if I normally haven’t thought of buying these types before.
And the other situation, I already decide the types what I should buy.
>>Otherwise, I would have already decided on the types of clothes that I would buy.
So it takes a half to one hour.
>>So it would take me about 30 minutes to one hour.
Even if I thought buy one pair of pants, I usually visit all my favorite shops in shopping mall.
>>Even if I am only buying one pair of pants, I usually visit all my favorite shops in the shopping mall.
As a result, I spend on shopping more than my friends do.
>>As a result, I spend more on shopping than my friends do.
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