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2018-07-27 · 첨삭 강사 Elly

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Homework : How much do you usually spend on shopping? Please explain. If I have enough money, I spend a long time on shopping. It takes two to three hours. But in opposite situation, I often finsih shopping more quickly. In first situaition, I buy the clothes that fascinates me although I didn't thought buying these types. And the other situation, I already decide the types what I should buy. So it takes a half to one hour. Even if I thought buy one pair of pants, I usually visit all my favorite shops in shopping mall. As a result, I spend on shopping more than my friends do.

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Hello [이름],

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Teacher ELLY.

Homework : How much do you usually spend on shopping? Please explain.

If I have enough money, I spend a long time on shopping.

>>If I have enough money, I will spend it by shopping for a long time.

It takes two to three hours.

CORRECT!

or>>It will take me two to three hours to shop.

But in opposite situation, I often finsih shopping more quickly.

>>But in a totally different situation, I often finish shopping more quickly.

In first situaition, I buy the clothes that fascinates me although I didn\'t thought buying these types.

>>Going back to the initial situation, I would buy clothes that fascinate me. Even if I normally haven’t thought of buying these types before.

And the other situation, I already decide the types what I should buy.

>>Otherwise, I would have already decided on the types of clothes that I would buy.

So it takes a half to one hour.

>>So it would take me about 30 minutes to one hour.

Even if I thought buy one pair of pants, I usually visit all my favorite shops in shopping mall.

>>Even if I am only buying one pair of pants, I usually visit all my favorite shops in the shopping mall.

As a result, I spend on shopping more than my friends do.

>>As a result, I spend more on shopping than my friends do.

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