homework
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- Blair
The modern meaning of TV\'s presence is that it is the most easily approachable way to get information. Despite of rapid development of media and electronic devices, many people, especially the elders have not got used to it. In result, they can only depend on newspapers or TVs. Even if some people are accustomed with using other devices, they are still able to watch TV for entertaining. Also, it is a convenient to watch TV while doing other things. Therefore, it is hard to imagine our lives without .However, TV made several social issues. For instance, some people are indulged into TV programs, and became couch potatoes.
The modern meaning/purpose of TV\'s presence is that it is the easiest way to get information. Despite of the rapid development of media and electronic devices, many people especially the elders have not got used to it. In result/as a result, they can only depend on newspapers or TVs. Even if some people are accustomed with using other devices, they are still able to watch TV for entertaining. In addition, it is the most convenient means of watching while doing other things. Therefore, it is hard to imagine our lives without it. However, TV made several social issues. For instance, some people are indulged into TV programs, and became couch potatoes.
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