Homework
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Teacher ELLY.
HOMEWORK: What was the last thing you returned or exchanged? Why?
I often didn\'t refund anything even if I decided to refund them.
>>I don’t often refund items, even if I thought of refunding one.
It has some reasons like time dead-line and the receipt.
>>There are some reasons, like a time limit and if you still have the receipt.
But I had some special experience about it.
>>But I had a special experience about it.
It appeared one year ago.
>>It happened one year ago.
In August 2017 I bought a smart phone.
>>Last August 2017, I bought a smart phone.
It called Galaxy Note 7 which SAMSUNG lunched.
>>It was the Galaxy Note 7, which was launched by Samsung.
I was so happy but it doesn\'t last a long time.
>>I was so happy but it didn\'t last a long time.
Some users reported this phone about possibility of explosion.
>>Some users have reported this phone about the possibility of battery explosion issues.
In the first it seemed a rumor, however it occurred many times.
>>At first, it seemed to be a rumour. However, it has occurred many times.
Therefore SAMSUNG had to recall the phone.
>>Therefore, Samsung had to recall the phones.
So, even if I didn\'t want to return it because I liked this, I returned the phone.
>>So, even if I didn\'t want to return it because I liked it, I still returned the phone.
Finally, I became an iPhone user :)
CORRECT!
or>>In the end, I switched to an iPhone brand.
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