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2018-07-31 · 첨삭 강사 Elly

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HOMEWORK: What was the last thing you returned or exchanged? Why? I often didn't refund anything even if I decided to refund them. It has some reasons like time dead-line and the receipt. But I had some special experience about it. It appeared one year ago. In August 2017 I bought a smart phone. It called Galaxy Note 7 which SAMSUNG lunched. I was so happy but it doesn't last a long time. Some users reported this phone about possibility of explosion. In the first it seemed a rumor, however it occurred many times. Therefore SAMSUNG had to recall the phone. So, even if I didn't want to return it because I liked this, I returned the phone. Finally I became an iPhone user :)

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름],

Thank you again for today!

Have a great Tuesday and talk to you later!

Teacher ELLY.

HOMEWORK: What was the last thing you returned or exchanged? Why?

I often didn\'t refund anything even if I decided to refund them.

>>I don’t often refund items, even if I thought of refunding one.

It has some reasons like time dead-line and the receipt.

>>There are some reasons, like a time limit and if you still have the receipt.

 But I had some special experience about it.

>>But I had a special experience about it.

 It appeared one year ago.

>>It happened one year ago.

 In August 2017 I bought a smart phone.

>>Last August 2017, I bought a smart phone.

 It called Galaxy Note 7 which SAMSUNG lunched.

>>It was the Galaxy Note 7, which was launched by Samsung.

 I was so happy but it doesn\'t last a long time.

>>I was so happy but it didn\'t last a long time.

Some users reported this phone about possibility of explosion.

>>Some users have reported this phone about the possibility of battery explosion issues.

In the first it seemed a rumor, however it occurred many times.

>>At first, it seemed to be a rumour. However, it has occurred many times.

Therefore SAMSUNG had to recall the phone.

>>Therefore, Samsung had to recall the phones.

So, even if I didn\'t want to return it because I liked this, I returned the phone.

>>So, even if I didn\'t want to return it because I liked it, I still returned the phone.

Finally, I became an iPhone user :)

CORRECT!

or>>In the end, I switched to an iPhone brand.

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