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2018-07-30 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

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If you could go back in the past and correct one mistake, what would it be? Why? Explain your answer in not more than ten (10) sentences. If I go back to 22 years old, I apply for USA ARMY after studing English. I had a chance to volunteer for US ARMY by my friend but I refused the opportuniy with fear. I regret at the moment that I could be a soldier and didn't need to worry about getting a job.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Layla! ^_^
Wow! You made your homework pretty fast! Impressive! :D

I think your answer to this question is pretty honest and I loved reading about it.

If I could go back in time, I would grab the opportunity to become a film maker.

I had that chance a few years ago but I let it go because it was stressful and I was scared.

Anyhow, I hope you\'re still doing great.

See you on Wednesday! ^^
~Teacher Charry

If I go back to 22 years old, I apply for USA ARMY after studing English.

>> If I could go back 22 years earlier, I would apply for the US army after studying English.

I had a chance to volunteer for US ARMY by my friend but I refused the opportuniy with fear.
>>
I had a chance to volunteer for the US ARMY through my friend but I refused the opportunity because of fear. 

OR >> I had a chance to volunteer for the US ARMY through my friend but I turned down the opportunity due to fear. 
I regret at the moment that I could be a soldier and didn\'t need to worry about getting a job.

>> I regret at the moment that I didn\'t become a soldier because I didn\'t need to worry about getting a job if I became one. 

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