homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
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~~Teacher Kate
1. Many people who like watching sports games tend to play gambling on sports events.
>>>CORRECT!
OR>>>Many sports enthusiasts tend to gamble on sports events.
2. Some of my friends suggest a tiny gambling when a big sports event holds on.
>>>Some of my friends gamble a little whenever we watch big sporting events.
3. In this game, winners can have free dinner.
>>>CORRECT!
OR>>>The winners of the game can have free dinner.
4. I think we can enjoy it unless winner\'s prize is getting bigger than this.
>>>I think we can enjoy it unless the prize becomes bigger than this.
5. On the other hand, a few of my friends and colleagues like to use illegal gambling sites because it gives more prizes.
>>>CORRECT!
6. I know that this will turn out very bad consequnces.
>>>I know that this will have negative consequences.
7. Thus, I try to stop them but it doesn\'t work very well.
>>>Although I try to stop them, it doesn\'t work.
8. For example, one of my friend had a colleague who addicted the gambling.
>>>For example, one of my friends had a colleague who became addicted to gambling.
9. He borrowed a lot of money from his surrounding people for it.
>>>He borrowed a lot of money from people he knew.
10. Even my friend have lended him more than five millions won because the co-worker said he had had emergency problem to solve immediately.
>>>My friend lent him more than five million won because his co-worker said he had an emergency.
11. Finally it ended up very bad.
>>>It ended up in disaster.
12. His debts added up to a half of billion won and he decied to kill by himself.
>>>His debts added up to half a billion won and he decided to kill himself.
13. That\'s why I don\'t like gambling.
>>>CORRECT!
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