HOMEWORK! ^^
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]! ^_^
You deserve the commendation because you always do your best. Thank you! ^^
I\'ve already eaten dinner. Hooray! kkk.
Don\'t worry about me. ^_^
Thank you for writing this beautiful essay. I think you have a sincere heart.
If I could go back in time, I would grab the opportunity to become a film maker.
I had that chance a few years ago but I let it go because it was stressful and I was scared.
Anyhow, I hope you\'re still doing great.
See you again tomorrow. ^^
~Teacher Charry
Dear Teacher Charry, ^_^
>> CORRECT!
I confirm your sincere feedback.
>> I confirmed your sincere feedback.
Thank you very much. >_<
>> CORRECT!
I\'m sorry you missed your meal.
>> CORRECT!
I hope you eat dinner soon!
>> CORRECT!
If you could go back in the past and correct one mistake, what would it be? Why?
I am worried because it is not one thing.
>> I am worried because it is not just one thing.
The most regrettable of all is the hurt of someone.
>> The most regrettable of all was hurting someone.
I am not good enough now, but I was less considerate of others when I was young.
>> I am not a great person now, but I was less considerate of others when I was young.
Family, friends, lovers, etc... I took it for granted, but now I regret it.
>> I took my family, friends, lovers and others for granted but now I regret it.
I should have endured a little more.
>> CORRECT!
I should have thought a little more.
>> CORRECT!
I can\'t forget the look of the other person who was hurt by me.
>> I can\'t forget the look of the other person I have hurt.
It comes back bigger.
>> [Do you mean]: It haunts me all the time.
Even now, I must be careful not to make big mistakes by speaking or acting.
>> Even now, I must be careful not to make big mistakes when speaking or acting.
I want to apologize again.
>> CORRECT!
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