HOMEWORK! ^^

2018-07-30 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

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Dear Teacher Charry, ^_^ I confirm your sincere feedback. Thank you very much. >_< I'm sorry you missed your meal. I hope you eat dinner soon! If you could go back in the past and correct one mistake, what would it be? Why? I am worried because it is not one thing. The most regrettable of all is the hurt of someone. I am not good enough now, but I was less considerate of others when I was young. Family, friends, lovers, etc... I took it for granted, but now I regret it. I should have endured a little more. I should have thought a little more. I can't forget the look of the other person who was hurt by me. It comes back bigger. Even now, I must be careful not to make big mistakes by speaking or acting. I want to apologize again.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]! ^_^

You deserve the commendation because you always do your best. Thank you! ^^

I\'ve already eaten dinner. Hooray! kkk.

Don\'t worry about me. ^_^

Thank you for writing this beautiful essay. I think you have a sincere heart.

If I could go back in time, I would grab the opportunity to become a film maker.

I had that chance a few years ago but I let it go because it was stressful and I was scared.

Anyhow, I hope you\'re still doing great.

See you again tomorrow. ^^
~Teacher Charry

Dear Teacher Charry, ^_^

>> CORRECT!
I confirm your sincere feedback.

>> I confirmed your sincere feedback.

Thank you very much. >_<

>> CORRECT!

I\'m sorry you missed your meal.

>> CORRECT!

I hope you eat dinner soon!
>> CORRECT!
If you could go back in the past and correct one mistake, what would it be? Why?
I am worried because it is not one thing.

>> I am worried because it is not just one thing.
The most regrettable of all is the hurt of someone.

>> The most regrettable of all was hurting someone.
I am not good enough now, but I was less considerate of others when I was young.

>> I am not a great person now, but I was less considerate of others when I was young.
 Family, friends, lovers, etc... I took it for granted, but now I regret it.

>> I took my family, friends, lovers and others for granted but now I regret it.
I should have endured a little more.

>> CORRECT!
I should have thought a little more.

>> CORRECT!
I can\'t forget the look of the other person who was hurt by me.

>> I can\'t forget the look of the other person I have hurt.

It comes back bigger.

>> [Do you mean]: It haunts me all the time.
Even now, I must be careful not to make big mistakes by speaking or acting.

>> Even now, I must be careful not to make big mistakes when speaking or acting.

I want to apologize again.

>> CORRECT!

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