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2018-07-31 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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Describe your favorite place in as much detail as possible. my favorite place is "eunpa reservoir in kunsan, korea" the place is so beutiful. It is well made. the reservoir is surrounded by many trees and flowers. especially in spring, tunnel is made by cherry blossoms trees. It is so amazing. I want to go every year.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!!!

Have a great day and I know you will have a nice lunch. See you tomorrow!!!
I hope you can really have fun in studying English.
Have a great day!!!
T. Jeny

Describe your favorite place in as much detail as possible.
>>correct
my favorite place is \"eunpa reservoir in kunsan, korea\"
>>My favorite place is \"Eunpa Reservoir in Kunsan, Korea\"
the place is so beutiful.
>>correct
It is well made.
>>correct
the reservoir is surrounded by many trees and flowers.
>>correct
especially in spring, tunnel is made by cherry blossoms trees.
>>Especially in spring, the tunnel is full of cherry blossom trees.
It is so amazing. I want to go every year.
>>It is so amazing and I want to go there every year.

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