Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hurrah!
I am truly excited for you, James! I bet you are more excited. Of course! lol
But of course, I still hope you could review Six Sigma during your holidays. lol I know, you need to enjoy. Maybe on the first few days. After that, you may then enjoy it fully.
All the best!
-Klein-
What\'s the first thing you will do during your vacation next month?
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As I said, at first I will go to my son\'s room when my summer holidays will started.
>>As I said, first, I will go to my son\'s room when my summer holidays will start.
My daughter really wants to go to a aquarium in Seoul.
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There is a big aquarium in Seoul, so we will go there.
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The aquarium is located in Samsung-dong and we will go there by subway.
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There is a big shopping mall and the name is Pierrot.
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It\'s similar with Donk Quixote in Japan.
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Don Quixote is the most famous shopping mall in Japan.
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I think Korean company\'s owner made a Pierrot shopping mall in Korea after they visited Japanene shopping mall Don Quixote.
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There are many things to buy and the price of product is cheaper than other shopping mall.
>>There are many things to buy and the price of the product is cheaper than other shopping malls.
Anyway I will enjoy my summer holidays with my family.
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