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2018-08-01 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

학생이 쓴 원문

What\'s the first thing you will do during your vacation next month? ==> As I said, at first I will go to my son\'s room when my summer holidays will started. My daughter really wants to go to a aquarium in Seoul. There is a big aquarium in Seoul, so we will go there. The aquarium is located in Samsung-dong and we will go there by subway. There is a big shopping mall and the name is Pierrot. It\'s similar with Donk Quixote in Japan. Don Quixote is the most famous shopping mall in Japan. I think Korean company\'s owner made a Pierrot shopping mall in Korea after they visited Japanene shopping mall Don Quixote. There are many things to buy and the price of product is cheaper than other shopping mall. Anyway I will enjoy my summer holidays with my family.

강사 첨삭

Hurrah!

I am truly excited for you, James! I bet you are more excited. Of course! lol

But of course, I still hope you could review Six Sigma during your holidays. lol I know, you need to enjoy. Maybe on the first few days. After that, you may then enjoy it fully.

All the best! 

-Klein-

What\'s the first thing you will do during your vacation next month?
 ==>
As I said, at first I will go to my son\'s room when my summer holidays will started.

>>As I said, first, I will go to my son\'s room when my summer holidays will start.
My daughter really wants to go to a aquarium in Seoul.

>>Correct
There is a big aquarium in Seoul, so we will go there.

>>Correct
The aquarium is located in Samsung-dong and we will go there by subway.

>>Correct
There is a big shopping mall and the name is Pierrot.
>> 
Correct

It\'s similar with Donk Quixote in Japan.

>>Correct (spelling check: Don)
 Don Quixote is the most famous shopping mall in Japan.

>>Correct
 I think Korean company\'s owner made a Pierrot shopping mall in Korea after they visited Japanene shopping mall Don Quixote.

>>Correct (spelling check: Japanese)
 There are many things to buy and the price of product is cheaper than other shopping mall.

>>There are many things to buy and the price of the product is cheaper than other shopping malls.
 Anyway I will enjoy my summer holidays with my family.

>>Correct

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