HOMEWORK! ^^
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]! ^_^
Thank you for writing a nice essay even if you\'re dead on your feet tonight.
I\'m sorry to hear that you had a nightmare last night.
It must have been difficult for you to go back to sleep again.
What was the nightmare all about?
Anyhow, I think your memory about your childhood is beautiful.
Have a restful night too.
See you again tomorrow. ^_^
~Teacher Charry
Dear Teacher Charry, ^_^
>> CORRECT!
I am very tired because I had a nightmare yesterday. T_T
>> CORRECT!
So I need to go to bed early.
>> CORRECT!
I hope you have a comfortable evening, too.
>> CORRECT!
< If you could relive one moment in your life, what would it be? Why?>
It was my birthday in elementary school.
>> CORRECT!
I went to a fancy restaurant for the first time.
>> CORRECT!
Usually, my father spent less money.
>> My father usually spent less money.
But he bought them all that day.
>> But he bought everything I wanted that day.
Almost 20 years ago, ice cream was 5,000 won.
>> Almost 20 years ago, an ice cream cost 5,000 won.
I took a picture with V.
>> I took a picture with a V sign.
All my family were happy.
>> All of my family members were happy.
In fact, Since I was a child, my memory is not clear.
>> In fact, my childhood memory is not clear.
But I felt my father\'s love.
>> CORRECT!
I also want to see my parents \' face when they were young.
>> CORRECT!
Now that I think about it, it\'s a precious memory.
>> CORRECT!
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