homework
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I got allowance from parents. I built a [이름]i cookie house. I constructed a [이름]i cookie building,too.I selled them with my brother.My brother bought them and sell them to his friend.
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I got allowance from parents.
>> I got an allowance from my parents.
I built a [이름]i cookie house.
>> correct
I constructed a [이름]i cookie building, too.
>> correct
I selled them with my brother.
>> I sold them to my brother.
My brother bought them and sell them to his friend.
>> My brother bought what I constructed and then sold them to his friend.
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