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Dear Sir or Madam,

>> Dear Sir/Madam,

 I am writing to let you know that I am so unsatisfied with my accommodation while the room conditions are the best, however, my housemate has started to live with her puppy without my permission and then she makes a noise when unfriendly people effort to near the pet even if it is all night. Because of the dog, I cannot sleep well. I believe you can solve this problem soon.

>> I am writing to let you know that while the room conditions are the best, I am very unsatisfied with my accommodation because my housemate has started to live with her puppy without my permission. The dog barks at strangers and makes noises even at night that\'s why I have trouble sleeping. I hope you can do something soon about this issue.

 Actually, my friend who is the best friend with me and finished same course with me told me that accommodations in Australia are not a problem because course provider will help me. But, it is totally differ as the room that I want. I requested that I have a pet allergy.

>> Actually, my best friend assured me that I won\'t encounter problems with my accommodations in Australia as the course provider will help me. However, the current room condition is different from what I requested. I requested that you consider my pet allergy in choosing my accommodation.

 Would you transfer to another accommodation for me or my housemate please? I already discussed this problem for several times with her. Nevertheless, we could not make a decision.

>> I would like to request that either my roommate or I be transferred to another accommodation. My roommate and I already discussed several times this problem but we couldn\'t make a decision.

 Thank you for my consideration.
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 Jiwon Park

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