HOMEWORK! ^^
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]! ^_^
Thank you for promptly doing your homework.
I truly admire your dedication.
Thank you for clarifying your answer earlier. ^^
I agree that married couples should not be pressured to have kids.
It should be an option but not a requirement.
Anyhow, I hope you\'re having a great time.
See you again tomorrow. ^^
~Teacher Charry
Dear Teacher Charry, ^_^
>> CORRECT!
I\'m afraid I didn\'t answer properly before.
>> CORRECT!
If my order is wrong, I talk to the restaurant one more time.
>> If my order is wrong, I talk to the service crew of the restaurant one more time.
They can also make mistakes if they are busy.
>> CORRECT!
However, it is hard to understand that the food is bad at restaurants.
>> However, it is hard to understand why the food is bad at restaurants.
That\'s why I don\'t go back.
>> CORRECT!
It\'s been hot here.
>> CORRECT!
I hope you are cool.
>> CORRECT!
See you tomorrow! >_<
>> CORRECT!
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Is it always necessary for a married couple to have kids? Why or why not?
I think it is not necessary.
>> CORRECT!
In the old days, the more children there were, the better.
>> CORRECT!
But Now is 21st century.
>> But it\'s the 21st century now.
OR >> But it\'s now the 21st century.
It takes a lot of money and effort to raise a child.
>> CORRECT!
Of course, there are many good things.
>> [Do you mean]: Of course, there are many benefits from it.
However, if we overstand it, it can cause problems.
>> CORRECT!
I have many friends who are married now.
>> CORRECT!
They are doing well without kid.
>> They are doing well without a kid.
After all, it is a matter for two people.
>> CORRECT!
A couple should be happy to have a child happy.
>> A couple should be happy to have a child.
I don\'t think it\'s necessary because the circumstances and ideas are different.
>> CORRECT!
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