HOMEWORK! ^^

2018-08-01 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

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Dear Teacher Charry, ^_^ I'm afraid I didn't answer properly before. If my order is wrong, I talk to the restaurant one more time. They can also make mistakes if they are busy. However, it is hard to understand that the food is bad at restaurants. That's why I don't go back. It's been hot here. I hope you are cool. See you tomorrow! >_< ------------------------- Is it always necessary for a married couple to have kids? Why or why not? I think it is not necessary. In the old days, the more children there were, the better. But Now is 21st century. It takes a lot of money and effort to raise a child. Of course, there are many good things. However, if we overstand it, it can cause problems. I have many friends who are married now. They are doing well without kid. After all, it is a matter for two people. A couple should be happy to have a child happy. I don't think it's necessary because the circumstances and ideas are different.

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]! ^_^

Thank you for promptly doing your homework.

I truly admire your dedication.

Thank you for clarifying your answer earlier. ^^

I agree that married couples should not be pressured to have kids.

It should be an option but not a requirement.

Anyhow, I hope you\'re having a great time.

See you again tomorrow. ^^

~Teacher Charry

Dear Teacher Charry, ^_^
>> CORRECT!
I\'m afraid I didn\'t answer properly before.

>> CORRECT!
If my order is wrong, I talk to the restaurant one more time.

>> If my order is wrong, I talk to the service crew of the restaurant one more time.
They can also make mistakes if they are busy.

>> CORRECT!
However, it is hard to understand that the food is bad at restaurants.

>> However, it is hard to understand why the food is bad at restaurants.

That\'s why I don\'t go back.

>> CORRECT!
It\'s been hot here.

>> CORRECT!

I hope you are cool.

>> CORRECT!

See you tomorrow! >_<

>> CORRECT!
 -------------------------
Is it always necessary for a married couple to have kids? Why or why not?

I think it is not necessary.

>> CORRECT!
In the old days, the more children there were, the better.

>> CORRECT!
But Now is 21st century.

>> But it\'s the 21st century now.

OR >> But it\'s now the 21st century.
It takes a lot of money and effort to raise a child.

>> CORRECT!
Of course, there are many good things.

>> [Do you mean]: Of course, there are many benefits from it.

However, if we overstand it, it can cause problems.
>> CORRECT!

I have many friends who are married now.

>> CORRECT!

They are doing well without kid.
>>
They are doing well without a kid.

After all, it is a matter for two people. 

>> CORRECT!

A couple should be happy to have a child happy.
>> 
A couple should be happy to have a child.

I don\'t think it\'s necessary because the circumstances and ideas are different.

>> CORRECT!

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