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I made a phone calls to my friend.Something happened overnight.Yesterday I went swim[이름]g pool with my parents.Afer that I sent an e-mail to my friend.Even though something happened.
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I made a phone calls to my friend.
>> I made phone calls to my friend.
Something happened overnight.
>> correct
Yesterday I went swim[이름]g pool with my parents.Afer that I sent an e-mail to my friend.
>> I went to the swim[이름]g pool yesterday with my parents, after that, I sent an e-mail to my friend.
Even though something happened.
>> correct
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