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2018-08-02 · 첨삭 강사 Elisha

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1. In Japan, the oyster seed is not only being cultured in nets to market size but also released on the bottom where good returns are being obtained two to three years later. 2. Several years ago, a tobacco company attempted to sell a cigarette that made no smoke; however, people who tested that product did not like the way it tasted. 3. The most common way of preserving genetic materials is to deposit seeds in gene banks; apart from that, cultivating plants in their original environment is the most natural preservation method. 4. The name Holland is frequently used instead of the Netherlands, but it actually refers to the two Western coastal provinces, North and South Holland. 5. Nevertheless recycling of wastes material solves the problem of garbage disposal at landfills, and saves resources, it entails large hidden costs in collecting, sorting and manufacturing.

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]! Thank you for doing your homework! See you! =)

~Teacher Elisha

1. In Japan, the oyster seed is not only being cultured in nets to market size but also released on the bottom where good returns are being obtained two to three years later.
>> CORRECT!
2. Several years ago, a tobacco company attempted to sell a cigarette that made no smoke; however, people who tested that product did not like the way it tasted.
>> CORRECT!
3. The most common way of preserving genetic materials is to deposit seeds in gene banks; apart from that, cultivating plants in their original environment is the most natural preservation method.
>> CORRECT!
4. The name Holland is frequently used instead of the Netherlands, but it actually refers to the two Western coastal provinces, North and South Holland.
>> CORRECT!
5. Nevertheless recycling of wastes material solves the problem of garbage disposal at landfills, and saves resources, it entails large hidden costs in collecting, sorting and manufacturing.

>> MUCH AS recycling of wastes material solves the problem of garbage disposal at landfills, and saves resources, it entails large hidden costs in collecting, sorting and manufacturing.

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