Homework

2018-08-02 · 첨삭 강사 Elly

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HOMEWORK: How often do you go to the library? Please discuss. I went to the library two times in a week. Especialy at an exam period, I was there almost everyday. But recently I wasn't there. Because my purpose to go there is to study, not read a book. So when I was in a term of the university, I studied at the library of the university. However during the vacation I have studied english at a cafe or my home. Due to I should speak english when I study, I couldn't have been the library.

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Hello [이름],

Thank you for today’s homework!

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Teacher ELLY.

HOMEWORK: How often do you go to the library? Please discuss.

I went to the library two times in a week.

>>I go to the library two times a week.

Especialy at an exam period, I was there almost everyday.

>>Especially, during exam periods, I was there almost every day.

or>> Especially, during tests, I go there almost on a daily basis.

But recently I wasn\'t there.

>>But recently, I haven’t been to the library.

Because my purpose to go there is to study, not read a book.

>>Because, my purpose in going there is to study, not to read a book.

So when I was in a term of the university, I studied at the library of the university.

>>So, when I studied for one semester at the university, I frequently went to the university’s library to study.

However during the vacation I have studied english at a cafe or my home.

>>However, during my vacation I studied English at a cafe and, sometimes, at home.

Due to I should speak english when I study, I couldn\'t have been the library.

>>Since I have to practice my English speaking skill during classes, I couldn\'t go to the library.

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