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Teacher ELLY.
HOMEWORK: How often do you go to the library? Please discuss.
I went to the library two times in a week.
>>I go to the library two times a week.
Especialy at an exam period, I was there almost everyday.
>>Especially, during exam periods, I was there almost every day.
or>> Especially, during tests, I go there almost on a daily basis.
But recently I wasn\'t there.
>>But recently, I haven’t been to the library.
Because my purpose to go there is to study, not read a book.
>>Because, my purpose in going there is to study, not to read a book.
So when I was in a term of the university, I studied at the library of the university.
>>So, when I studied for one semester at the university, I frequently went to the university’s library to study.
However during the vacation I have studied english at a cafe or my home.
>>However, during my vacation I studied English at a cafe and, sometimes, at home.
Due to I should speak english when I study, I couldn\'t have been the library.
>>Since I have to practice my English speaking skill during classes, I couldn\'t go to the library.
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