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2018-08-06 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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Dear [Name], I‘m writing to let you know that I’m satisfied with my travel.In fact, I've been to Japan few days ago. My Japanese friend who is my best friend since I study in language school invited to Japan and her father had using a traditional Japanese restaurant for free from his company. Before I went to the restaurant, my friend booked the date to use these tickets. Let me explain what I saw in Japan. After I arrive in downtown, I met my friend and her families. And then, her family member and I’ve been to traditional Japanese restaurant. The most memorable things in Japan is ‘Kaiseki’ which is a traditional multi-course Japanese dinner. The foods are fluffy, colourful, not strong flavor and very soft. They know that I’m a chef in Korea so families want to be a helpful for me. Could you visit to a traditional Japanese restaurant together? Maybe my friend can help us to make a reservation to visit at the restaurant. I hope to visit there with you soon. Your friend, Jiwon

강사 첨삭

Hello!^^

Thank you for sending your homework.

Cheers!
Teacher Jean

Dear [Name],
>> correct

I‘m writing to let you know that I’m satisfied with my travel.In fact, I\'ve been to Japan few days ago. My Japanese friend who is my best friend since I study in language school invited to Japan and her father had using a traditional Japanese restaurant for free from his company. Before I went to the restaurant, my friend booked the date to use these tickets.
>> I\'m writing to let you know that I\'m satisfied with my travel. I\'ve been to Japan a few days ago. My Japanese best friend whom I met at a language school invited me to Japan. Her father can book a table free of charge at a traditional Japanese restaurant. My friend\'s father booked a table for us before we went to the restaurant.

Let me explain what I saw in Japan. After I arrive in downtown, I met my friend and her families. And then, her family member and I’ve been to traditional Japanese restaurant. The most memorable things in Japan is ‘Kaiseki’ which is a traditional multi-course Japanese dinner. The foods are fluffy, colourful, not strong flavor and very soft. They know that I’m a chef in Korea so families want to be a helpful for me.
>> Let me tell you more about my travel. I met my friend and her family when I arrived downtown and then they brought me to the traditional restaurant. The most memorable thing in Japan is the \'Kaiseke\' which is a traditional multi-course Japanese dinner. The foods are fluffy, colourful, doesn\'t have a strong flavor, and very soft. My friend\'s family knows that I\'m a chef in Korea so they want to introduce interesting and famous restaurants in Japan.

Could you visit to a traditional Japanese restaurant together? Maybe my friend can help us to make a reservation to visit at the restaurant.
>> Would you want to visit that place with me next time? Maybe my friend can help reserve a table for us at that restaurant.

I hope to visit there with you soon.
>> I hope to visit that place with you soon.

Your friend,
>> correct
Jiwon
>> correct

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