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Q> >>>
What are the advantages and disadvantages of having a lot of friends?
A >>>
advantages
when I have a difficulty ,
friends will be help me anytime. and i believe it .
disadvantages
it is very hard to meet many friends at the same time.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Mr. [Name] ^^
Please check your corrections below:)
when I have a difficulty , friends will be help me anytime. and i believe it .
>> When I am in trouble or if I am in down my friends can help me, anytime anywhere and I believe in my friends
it is very hard to meet many friends at the same time.
>> It is very hard to meet many friends at the same time.
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