homework
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If you could change one thing in the past, what would it be? Explain your answer in not more than FIVE (5) sentences.
I want to change my smartphone in past.
My smartphone company is LG.
But I think SAMSUNG smartphone is good.
Because it is comportable.
So I want to change my phone in past.
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If you could change one thing in the past, what would it be? Explain your answer in not more than FIVE (5) sentences.
I want to change my smartphone in past.
>> I want to change my old smartphone.
My smartphone company is LG.
>> My smartphone brand is LG.
But I think SAMSUNG smartphone is good.
>> Correct.
Because it is comportable.
>> Because it is comfortable.
So I want to change my phone in past.
>> So I want to change my old phone.
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