HOMEWORK! ^^
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Thank you for taking the time to do your homework.
I\'m sorry to hear that you need to cut on your calorie intake.
By the way, I loved reading your essay.
I think you gave a very honest answer.
It\'s true that we need to look at both sides of the situation.
While following what we want in life seem to be enticing, we should still take into consideration of our parents\' opinions.
I hope you\'re doing great.
I\'ll see you again tomorrow.
~Teacher Charry :)
Dear Teacher Charry, ^_^
>> CORRECT!
Maybe because I ate too much, I gained weight. T_T
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I gained weight because maybe I ate too much.
I need to eat less tomorrow. ^_^;
>> CORRECT!
Let\'s meet on your favorite Friday! ♬
Let\'s meet on your favorite day which is Friday! ♬
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Which is more important, following your dreams or following your parents\' dreams for you? Why?
I can\'t answer this homework clearly.
>> CORRECT!
When I was young, I thought what I wanted to do was the best.
>> CORRECT!
So I did not follow my parents \' dream.
>> CORRECT!
But as adults, I can see why they said that.
>> But as an adult, I can see why they said that.
They didn\'t want their daughter to suffer.
>> CORRECT!
In fact, I did what I wanted and couldn\'t get a better result.
>> CORRECT!
However, I think it would have been harder if I had not been able to follow my parents \' wishes.
>> CORRECT!
I have to take responsibility for what I did.
>> CORRECT!
So I think, I should listen to various opinions and find a suitable compromise.
>> CORRECT!
Life\'s only one time!
>> We only live once!
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