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I'm going to Perth in western Australia. This decision was affected by a person who I met during the military service. He came to unit two month later and three years older than me. He could speak English well because he's been a long time in Canada like Elly. Since he and I had a related position we talked a lot and became familiar quickly. In a free time I usually studied math or English because math helped my head not get bad and I want to know about English. So when I was studying English, He often helped me what I didn't understand. One day he told me a plan after the military service. It was he will go to Perth in Australia. He told me that he wanted to trip Australia and his older sister got married in there. Then he said a lot about working holiday and Perth. Now, he's in Perth and gives me information. And he promise me that He will come to meet at the airport. Although he will left in September for second visa, I'm happy I will meet him for the first time in a long time.

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Teacher ELLY.

I\'m going to Perth in western Australia.

>>I\'m going to Perth, in Western Australia.

This decision was affected by a person who I met during the military service.

>>This decision was because of a person whom I met during my military service.

or>>I was influenced with this decision by someone I met in the military.

He came to unit two month later and three years older than me.

>>He came to our unit two months after I did. He’s three years older than me.

He could speak English well because he\'s been a long time in Canada like Elly.

>>He can speak English well because he\'s been in Canada for a long time, just like Elly.

Since he and I had a related position we talked a lot and became familiar quickly.

>>Since he and I had similar positions, we talked a lot and became familiar with each other in just a short time.

In a free time I usually studied math or English because math helped my head not get bad and I want to know about English.

>>During my free time, I usually studied math or English. Because math helped me with my mental skill, so that it will not become dull. And, I want to learn the English language.

So when I was studying English, He often helped me what I didn\'t understand.

>>So, when I was studying English, he often helped me with the things I didn\'t understand.

One day he told me a plan after the military service.

>>One day, he told me his plan after the military service.

It was he will go to Perth in Australia.

>>His plan was to go to Perth, Australia.

He told me that he wanted to trip Australia and his older sister got married in there.

>>He told me that he wanted to go on a trip to Australia since his older sister got married there.

Then he said a lot about working holiday and Perth.

>>Then he said a lot of information about going to Perth on a working holiday.

Now, he\'s in Perth and gives me information.

>>Now, he\'s in Perth and gives me tons of information.

And he promise me that He will come to meet at the airport.

>>And he promised me that he will meet me at the airport.

Although he will left in September for second visa, I\'m happy I will meet him for the first time in a long time. 

>>Although, he will leave in September to renew his visa, I\'m happy that I will meet him again after a long time.