homework

Hello Jake!

Thank you for your composition today.

Please take note of the suggestions below.

Try to apply them in your conversations.^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

I have read lots of books since I was able to read.

>> Correct

I liked to read diferrent kinds of genres such as history, science fiction, self-developemnet.

>> I have always liked to read books from different kinds of genres such as history, science fiction, and self-development.

However, the most favorite one is written by Dale Carnegie.

>> However, my favorite one is written by Dale Carnegie.

This book whose title is \"How to Win Friends & Influence People\" describes important things in human relationship.

>> This book, which is entitled \"How to Win Friends & Influence People\", describes important things in human relationships.

I read it when I took the leadership class in the university.

>> I read it when I took a leadership class in the university.

It has affected me a lot.

>> Correct

I have been trying to make a good relationships with my surrounding people after the class and the book.

>> I have been trying to build good relationships with the people around me since I took that class and read the book. 

It didn\'t make a huge result, but I have good people around me now.

>> It didn\'t bring about huge results but I have good people around me now.

Plus, I am looking foward to know more good people in the future.

>> Plus, I am looking forward to meeting more good people in the future.