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Dear [Name]. [Name]

>> Dear [Name]. [Name],

 I am writing to let you know that I want to withdraw two courses to control my timetable for college properly. Furthermore, perhaps I can attend those courses for next semester.

>> I am writing to let you know that I want to withdraw from my two courses to properly manage my timetable.

 Let me explain my original plan. At the moment, I was not sure that I can study an art course and math course. But, an assistant who can help students to organise their schedules told me that those courses are not full people so I can be present. Also, I effort to make a extra time to join courses, though, I already passed a job interview and then the manager in the cafe send me a roster for a month.

>> [THIS PART IS CONFUSING. I\'M NOT SURE WHAT YOU WANT TO SAY. BELOW IS MY INTERPRETATION.]

>> In the beginning of the term, I wasn\'t sure if I could study art and math courses at the same time but a student assistant told me that those aren\'t full that\'s why I decided to enroll in both. I put a lot of efforts to make time for the two courses, however, I just passed a job interview and I\'m not confident that I can juggle both my studies and my part time job.

 Could you are able to refund school fees about two courses? An assistant mentioned that I need to direct a request letter to you.
>> I would like to request a tuition refund for both courses. A student assistant mentioned that I need your permission in order to obtain a refund.

 Thank you for your consideration.

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 Your Sincerely,

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 Jiwon Park