HOMEWORK! ^^
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Hi, [이름]! ^_^
I agree that difficult times will pass too.
I would like to congratulate you and your boyfriend for making it on your first year as a couple.
I\'m happy for the both of you. ^_^
It is true that our senses are very important and it\'s very difficult to give up one of them.
I personally love to eat so I think giving up my sense of smell would be quite difficult for me. kkk.
I\'m glad to hear that this question has reminded you to take good care of your body more. ^_^
I hope you\'re having a lovely night.
See you again on Monday. ^_^
~Teacher Charry :)
Dear Teacher Charry, ^_^
>> CORRECT!
I\'m tired because I\'m busy, but I think it\'s better than working outside on a hot day. T_T
>> CORRECT!
This moment will pass.^_^
>> CORRECT!
In fact, August 5 is the first anniversary of our having loved each other.
>> In fact, August 5 is our first anniversary for loving each other.
I wanted to see a musical, and he was very kind of prepared for me.
>> I wanted to see a musical and he was very kind to prepare for me.
I\'ll give you my review when I get back. ^3^
>> CORRECT!
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If you had to lose one sense, which would it be? Why?
Five senses are indispensable.
>> The five senses are indispensable.
So it is very difficult to choose.
>> CORRECT!
If only I could choose one ... It has a sense of smell.
>> If I could only choose one, it has to be the sense of smell.
Actually, I have rhinitis, so I have a bad runny nose and sneezing every morning.
>> Actually, I have rhinitis so I have a bad runny nose and I sneeze a lot every morning.
I hate my nose when it\'s bad.
>> CORRECT!
But if I don\'t have a sense of smell, I can\'t smell fresh, right?
>> [Do you mean]: But if I don\'t have a sense of smell, I can\'t smell the scents, right?
I can\'t taste it right?
>> I can\'t taste the food right?
It\'s too painful.
>> CORRECT!
Just thinking about it makes me feel difficult.
>> Just thinking about it makes it difficult for me.
I will take good care of my body.
>> CORRECT!
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