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2018-08-06 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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What fashions that you see today do you think will be out of fashion within two years? I'm not interested in fashions so I don't know about it. I just wear what I thought it looks neat. I envy someone who is fashionable. But I don't follow the up to date fashion style. I just choose what I thought it's good for me. Nowadays Moon want to change her glasses. The shape of glasses is round. I think round one was glasses fashion in 1980th. It is up to date style but it will disappear soon. When I buy glasses, I wear them for about twon years. If I buy her round stye glasses this year, I maybe have to buy another one next year because it will disappear very quickly. People's minds are easily changed. Up to date fashions will be out of. I will think about it whether I will buy her up to date one or another neat one.

강사 첨삭

Hello Eunice!

It\'s a good thing that you were able to find time last weekend to write.

it really is good practice.

Please take note of the correct usage of words and expressions.

I\'ll talk to you later!

~~ Teacher Sharon

I\'m not interested in fashions so I don\'t know about it.

>> I\'m not interested in fashion so I don\'t know much about it.
I just wear what I thought it looks neat.

>> I just wear what I think looks neat.
I envy someone who is fashionable.

>> I envy a person who is fashionable.
But I don\'t follow the up to date fashion style.

>> Correct
I just choose what I thought it\'s good for me.

>>  I just choose what I think is good for me.
Nowadays Moon want to change her glasses.

>> Nowadays, Moon wants to change her glasses.

The shape of glasses is round.

>> The frames of her glasses are round.
I think round one was glasses fashion in 1980th.

>> I think the round frames were popular in the 1980\'s.
It is up to date style but it will disappear soon.

>> It is in fashion now but I believe it will soon be gone.
When I buy glasses, I wear them for about twon years.

>> When I buy glasses, I wear them for about two years.
If I buy her round stye glasses this year, I maybe have to buy another one next year because it will disappear very quickly.

>> If I buy her round frame glasses this year, I may have to buy another one next year because the trend can change very quickly.
People\'s minds are easily changed.

>> It is easy for people to change their minds.

Up to date fashions will be out of.

>> What is fashionable now may disappear tomorrow.
I will think about it whether I will buy her up to date one or another neat one.

>> I\'m still thinking if I would buy her the up to date glasses or just some practical ones.

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