Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
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Teacher ELLY.
HOMEWORK: When is your birthday? Please explain your answer.
My birth day is the every 20th January.
>>My birth day is on every 20th of January.
I was born at winter of 1995.
>>I was born in winter, in 1995.
or>>I was born on a winter day, in 1995.
There are such a curious thing about it.
>>There is such a curious thing about it.
It is that more than four people who I met have this birthday.
>>It is that, I have met more than four people, who have this birthday.
I met the people at the high school, the university, class and so on.
>>I met these people in high school, at my university, in a class and so on.
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