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2018-08-06 · 첨삭 강사 Elly

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HOMEWORK: When is your birthday? Please explain your answer. My birth day is the every 20th January. I was born at winter of 1995. There are such a curious thing about it. It is that more than four people who I met have this birthday. I met the people at the high school, the university, class and so on.

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Please keep up the good work!

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Teacher ELLY.

HOMEWORK: When is your birthday? Please explain your answer.

My birth day is the every 20th January.

>>My birth day is on every 20th of January.

I was born at winter of 1995.

>>I was born in winter, in 1995.

or>>I was born on a winter day, in 1995.

There are such a curious thing about it.

>>There is such a curious thing about it.

It is that more than four people who I met have this birthday.

>>It is that, I have met more than four people, who have this birthday.

I met the people at the high school, the university, class and so on.

>>I met these people in high school, at my university, in a class and so on.

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