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I want to take vacay to Europe.
Sometimes round tables can be uncomfortable.
Guided tour has it's own advantages.
When I travel abroad, I like to tour classic places than modern city.
I have no idea how preserve a rose.
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Jean
I want to take vacay to Europe.
>> I want to take a vacay to Europe.
>> or: I want to go on a vacay to Europe.
Sometimes round tables can be uncomfortable.
>> Round tables can be uncomfortable sometimes.
Guided tour has it\'s own advantages.
>> A guided tour has its own advantages.
When I travel abroad, I like to tour classic places than modern city.
>> When I travel abroad, I prefer to tour places that show their history over a modern city.
I have no idea how preserve a rose.
>> correct
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