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2018-08-08 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

학생이 쓴 원문

How has your family background affected the way you see the world? From I was born, My parents are struggle with each other. So our brothers and sisters have had a hard time until now. To me, It weakens my confidence. Especially, When I prepare to go to university, I was so weak and couldn't concentrate my studying. But after I met my jejus, My character was changed. I knew that my parents are best parents for me. After that I could have positive character and do everything.

강사 첨삭

Hi there! :))

 

I hope you\'re doing good. We have to stand firm in our faith. Thank you for sending your homework, I appreciate it. :)) And also, I would like to thank you for being participative during our class. :)) You constantly improving and I am very glad. :)


TJeny



How has your family background affected the way you see the world?
>>correct
From I was born, My parents are struggle with each other. 

>>From the day that I was born, my parents struggled with each other. 
 So our brothers and sisters have had a hard time until now.

>>So my brothers and sisters had a hard time until now.
 To me, It weakens my confidence.

>>For me, it weakened my confidence.

Especially, When I prepare to go to university, I was so weak and couldn\'t concentrate my studying.

>>Especially, when I was preparing to go to the university, I was so weak and couldn\'t concentrate on my studies.
 But after I met my jejus, My character was changed.

>>But after I met Jesus, my character changed.

I knew that my parents are best parents for me.

>>I knew that my parents are the best parents for me.

After that I could have positive character and do everything.

>>After that I\'ve gained positive character and I can do everything.

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