homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1. I always wanted to be an idle person.
2. Getting some allowance from parents can be a good way to learn how to use money.
3. I wanted to volunteer for teaching math to children, but i wasn't old enough.
4. I only join extra curricular activities I find interesting.
강사 첨삭
Hello!^^
Thank you for sending your homework.
Cheers!
Jean
1. I always wanted to be an idle person.
>> correct^^
2. Getting some allowance from parents can be a good way to learn how to use money.
>> correct
3. I wanted to volunteer for teaching math to children, but i wasn\'t old enough.
>> correct
4. I only join extra curricular activities I find interesting.
>> correct
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