Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
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~Teacher Shanee^^,
Do violent images, music, and games cause people to act out violently?
Yes, they do.
>>> Correct!
people don\'t feel any guilty when they see same things
over and over. Even though that is really bad and cruel.
>>> People don\'t feel guilty when they see same things over and over, even though those are really bad and cruel.
Sometimes people misunderstand that it is ok to act violently or they think that is really cool things to do.
>>> Sometimes people misunderstand that it is okay to act violently or they think that it is a cool thing to do.
People need to see good things to be great.
>>> Correct!
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