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2018-08-09 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

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HELLO, rose I'm also happy to meet you ^^ but I want to change my schedule again. I'm so sorry to inform that. I could'nt s[이름]p at all. and Thank you for your encouragement and new information about your country. Here are some incomplete sentences which you may continue constructing. Be careful with the conjunctions!^^ Choose the correct conjunction. 1.I need to work hard _so that___ I can pass the exam. 2. Althouh______ he was the best qualified party candidate, he didn't win the elections. 3. ___When____ you come back from your trip, we'll meet to discuss the problem. 4.They said that the movie was fantastic, _so_____ I watched it. 5.______, he didn't take any medicine.--> I don,t know ㅜㅜ

강사 첨삭

Hi Ms. [Name]!

I was so happy that I was able to talk with you yesterday!

You\'re one of the best people I\'ve talked with :)

I understand that you have to s[이름]p in order to work well^^

HELLO, rose 

>>Hello, Rose.
 I\'m also happy to meet you ^^

>>CORRECT!

but I want to change my schedule again.

>>However, I want to change my schedule again.
 I\'m so sorry to inform that.

>>CORRECT!
 I could\'nt s[이름]p at all.

>>I couldn\'t s[이름]p at all.
 and Thank you for your encouragement and new information about your country.
>>Moreover, thank you for your encouragement and new information about your country.
Here are some incomplete sentences which you may continue constructing. Be careful with the conjunctions!^^
Choose the correct conjunction.

>>CORRECT!
 1.I need to work hard _so that___ I can pass the exam. 

>>CORRECT!
 2. Althouh______ he was the best qualified party candidate, he didn\'t win the elections.

>> 2. Although______ he was the best qualified party candidate, he didn\'t win the elections.
 3. ___When____ you come back from your trip, we\'ll meet to discuss the problem.

>>CORRECT!
 4.They said that the movie was fantastic, _so_____ I watched it. 

>>CORRECT!
 5.______, he didn\'t take any medicine.--> I don,t know ㅜㅜ

>>Although he was sick, he didn\'t take any medicine.

(Oh, I am sorry, Ms. [Name], I should have told you to write your idea about this subordinate clause.)

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