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2018-08-09 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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If I had the authority to change government policies in a positive way, I will change welfare. These days government want to give many things to people. But, There are rich poeple. They can afford to pay for their living. If I had a chance to change policies, I will make flexible benefit plan.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름],
Time is flying so fast like a blink of an eye. I just hope this week is going smoothly with you!
You\'ve done a great job! I have to say, each passing day that we\'re having classes there are some changes in you. It may not lead you right away to the perfection and mastery of the language but at least you\'re getting there step by step! Never give up and just keep yourself motivated!

Take care!!!
T. Jeny

If I had the authority to change government policies in a positive way,I will change welfare.
>>If I had the authority to change government policies in a positive way, I will change its welfare.
These days government want to give many things to people.
>>These days, the government wants to give many things to the people.
But, There are rich people.
>>correct
They can afford to pay for their living.
>>correct
If I had a chance to change policies, I will make flexible benefit plan.
>> If I had a chance to change the policies, I will make a flexible benefit plan.

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