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강사 첨삭
Hello Jin Young. I appreciate your effort for sending this in. I heard about the term \"satori\" in Korean. This basically refers to the accent people have in each province. Since you were born in Seoul, you probably do not have an accent. One tip I can give you on how to have a neutral English accent, watch a lot of English movies or TV shows. Try to imitate how you hear people talk in English. That\'s what I did. Growing up, I\'ve been watching a lot of English movies. It helped me. Good luck!
-T. Beth :)
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What is the best thing about your birthplace?
- When I played with my friends in birthplace, I was so happy that I can\'t forget this memories.
>>> When I played with my neighborhood friends in my birthplace, I was so happy that I can\'t forget these memories.
How is our accent affected by your birthplace?
- If we listen to conversation of vicinity in birthplace, we imitate their accent.
>>> If we listen to conversations within the vicinity of our birthplace, we imitate their accent.
- So, our birthplace affect to our accent a lot.
>>> So, our birthplace affects our accent a lot.
>>> OR: So our birthplace has a big effect on our accent.
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