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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello Jin Young. Thank you for sending this in. I\'ve heard about Dongdaemun, but not specifically Dongdaemun Design Plaza. I searched Google for pictures of it and the night view looks amazing. It looks very futuristic. Enjoy your weekend. See you in class!
- T. Beth
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When I walked in subway with friend yesterday, some tourist, who I think are European, approached to me.
>>> When I walked in subway with a friend yesterday, some tourist, who I think are European, approached to me.
They asked to me how can arrive to DDP meaning dongdaemun design plaza.
>>> They asked to me how to go to DDP which means Dongdaemun Design Plaza.
>>> OR: They asked me direction to DDP which stands for Dongdaemun Design Plaza.
So I explained to way arriving to DDP in detail.
>>> So I explained the way going to DDP in detail.
>>> OR: So I explained the way direction going to DDP in detail.
I think that tourist who want to find architectural beauty have to go to DDP.
>>> CORRECT.
I recommend this structure to tourist who want to find beautiful photo gone.
>>> I recommend this structure to tourists who want to take beautiful photos.
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