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Why do we need to be careful if we want to say our thoughts or our opinion to a person that we are not close too?
It's not easy to convey our thoughts or opinion to the other person since it sometimes can makes some misunderstanding. Especially when the listener is not close to me, it can leads to discomfort each other.
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It\'s not easy to convey our thoughts or opinion to the other person since it sometimes can makes some misunderstanding. Especially when the listener is not close to me, it can leads to discomfort each other.
>> It\'s not easy to convey our thoughts or opinion to the other person since sometimes we can make some misunderstanding especially when the other person is not that close to me, it can leads to uncomfortable situation.
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