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2018-08-13 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

학생이 쓴 원문

1. personal time 2. step back 3. has happened 4. devastating situation 5. biggest hero It's my personal time when I feel most comfortable. Step back from there there is just painted wall. What has happened is not important but is only pasting time. What one shall meet in desert it's a devastating situation. My biggest hero is a Robot what has appeared in TV on my younger days.

강사 첨삭

Hello!^^

Thank you for sending your homework.

Cheers!
Jean

1. personal time
2. step back
3. has happened
4. devastating situation
5. biggest hero

It\'s my personal time when I feel most comfortable.
>> correct

Step back from there there is just painted wall.
>> Step back from the newly painted wall.

What has happened is not important but is only pasting time.
>> What has happened is not important but it is only for killing time.

What one shall meet in desert it\'s a devastating situation.
>> One can meet a devastating situation in the desert.

My biggest hero is a Robot what has appeared in TV on my younger days.
>> My biggest hero is a robot that I watched on TV in my younger days.

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