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Are there any special events that take place in summer in your country?
Our country's events are ice cream events.
The weather is so hot,the ice cream is more cheaper.
So, I can eat a ice cream everyday.
The weather is so hot in this year,we don't have a special festival outside.
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Are there any special events that take place in summer in your country?
Our country\'s events are ice cream events.
>> In our country, there is ice cream festival.
The weather is so hot,the ice cream is more cheaper.
>> If the weather is hot, the price of ice cream is cheaper.
So, I can eat a ice cream everyday.
>> So I can eat ice cream every day.
The weather is so hot in this year,we don\'t have a special festival outside.
>> The weather is so hot this year, we don\'t have a special festival.
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