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Why we should choose our friends?
I think when we meet friends congenial to me, we would feel very joy and comfort. But when we meet someone who was otherwise-minded, i would feel uncomfort. So we should choose our friends to maintain a good relationship with a real friend.
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I think when we meet friends congenial to me, we would feel very joy and comfort. But when we meet someone who was otherwise-minded, i would feel uncomfort. So we should choose our friends to maintain a good relationship with a real friend.
>> I think when I meet new friends it\'s congenial to me, I feel very happy at the same time it is very comfortable feeling to have new friends .But when we meet someone who is our opposite I feel very uncomfortable. So we should choose our friends to maintain a good relationship with a real friend.
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