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2018-08-13 · 첨삭 강사 Grace

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What are the advantages and disadvantages of having a lot of siblings? The advantage of having a lot of siblings is that you can do better with your siblings by doing together. For example, when you were young, you could play with your silblings and It would be better than playing alone. The disadvantage of having a lot of siblings is that you have to give your little brother or sister up sometimes.

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The advantage of having a lot of siblings is that you can do better with your siblings by doing together. For example, when you were young, you could play with your silblings and It would be better than playing alone. The disadvantage of having a lot of siblings is that you have to give your little brother or sister up sometimes.

>> The advantages of having a lot of siblings is that you can do better with your siblings by doing together. For example, when you were young, you could play with your siblings and It would be better than playing alone. The disadvantages of having a lot of siblings are that you have to give your little brother or sister up sometimes.

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