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2018-08-14 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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ESSAY (Please write a short essay to answer the question.) > Where in the world would you like to live if given the chance? Why there? If given the chance that I can choose the world where I live, I want to live in Switzerland. To my professor, I heard Switzerland have wonderful environment. So, he think how Swiss can study in their beautiful environment. He say, "If I was Swiss, I don't study and live in magnificent environment with no concern". After I talk with my professor, I decide that I must be going to travel Switzerland.

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Hello Jin Young! I appreciate your effort once again for answering this and sending it in. I\'ve heard a lot of good things about Switzerland, too. I think it\'s a place people who love nature must go to. I would want to live life like your professor if I lived in such an amazing environment. But then again, reality strikes. We need to work to pay bills. And to have good work, we need to study. I guess a balance between study and free time is necessary. Study hard and play hard. Have a good day!

-T. Beth

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If given the chance that I can choose the world where I live, I want to live in Switzerland.

>>> If given the chance to choose where to live in the world, I want to live in Switzerland. 

To my professor, I heard Switzerland have wonderful environment.

>>> According to my professor, Switzerland has a wonderful environment.   

So, he think how Swiss can study in their beautiful environment.

>>> So he wondered how Swiss could study in their beautiful environment.   

He say, \"If I was Swiss, I don\'t study and live in magnificent environment with no concern\".

>>> He said, \"If I were a Swiss, I wouldn\'t study and just live in a magnificent environment with no concern.\"   

After I talk with my professor, I decide that I must be going to travel Switzerland.

>>> After talking to my professor, I decided I must go travel to Switzerland.    

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