HOMEWORK! ^^
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]! ^_^
It\'s really good to have you back.
I was so excited to see you.
Thank you for studying with me again.
Your essay was awesome.
It is true that young people often find validation from their friends.
Thus, they become easier to manipulate.
It is true that this is a difficult social problem.
I hope you\'re doing great.
See you in class tomorrow. ^^
~Teacher Charry
Dear Teacher Charry, ^_^
>> CORRECT!
Good to see you! >3<
>> It\'s good to see you! >3<
I\'m glad to hear that you live in good weather.
>> I\'m glad to hear that you live in a good weather.
It\'s still better to be hot than cold.
>> CORRECT!
It\'ll be cool in September. :)
>> CORRECT!
< Is peer pressure beneficial or harmful?>
Now that I\'m an adult, I don\'t have much influence.
>> CORRECT!
However, Peer pressure is strong among young people.
>> However, peer pressure is strong among young people.
In my experience, I think there is more harm than good.
>> CORRECT!
Teenagers may find it difficult to resist peer pressure.
>> CORRECT!
They can\'t speak their opinions because they\'re read another\'s countenance.
>> They can\'t speak their opinions because they read another\'s countenance.
Peer pressure may lead others into juvenile delinquency.
>> CORRECT!
It is easier to do bad things in groups than in individuals.
>> CORRECT!
The judgment will be blurred.
>> Their judgment will be blurred.
They can regret it if they look back later.
>> CORRECT!
Humans are social animals, but this is a very difficult problem.
>> CORRECT!
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