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2018-08-14 · 첨삭 강사 Trainee

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What are the travel tips you could give me when I go to Seoul, South Korea? ==> There are many sightseeing in Seoul. In my case I don't live in Seoul, so I cannot explain in detail where is the best place in Seoul but I can give you approximate information. I heard that, if you visit Seoul for the first time, the city tour bus is good way to know about Seoul. You can ride on the bus in front of DONGDAEMOON market, and you can go famous place in Seoul with that bus. There is a guide in the bus and he will explain about Seoul. So it will give you good information where you will go. And you can find to easy where is the famous place in Seoul in the internet blog. I sometimes search these blog when I want to visit in Seoul. Using city tour bus and searching web site give you good information when you visit in Seoul.

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There are many sightseeing in Seoul.

>>There are many sites to see in Seoul.
 In my case I don\'t live in Seoul, so I cannot explain in detail where is the best place in Seoul but I can give you approximate information.

>>In my case, I don\'t live in Seoul, so I cannot explain in detail where the best place  is in Seoul but I can give you approximate information.

I heard that, if you visit Seoul for the first time, the city tour bus is good way to know about Seoul.

>>I heard that, if you are visiting Seoul for the first time, the city tour bus is a good way to go around the city.
You can ride on the bus in front of DONGDAEMOON market, and you can go famous place in Seoul with that bus.

>>You can ride on the bus just in front of Dongdeamoon market and you can go to famous places in Seoul on that tour bus.
There is a guide in the bus and he will explain about Seoul.

>>There is a guide in the bus who will explain about Seoul.

>>OR: There is a tourist guide on the bus giving informative details about Seoul. 
So it will give you good information where you will go.

>>CORRECT!

>>OR: It will give you useful information where to go.
And you can find to easy where is the famous place in Seoul in the internet blog.

>> And you can search easily where the famous places are in Seoul in the internet blog.
I sometimes search these blog when I want to visit in Seoul.

>>I sometimes search these blogs when I want to visit Seoul.
Using city tour bus and searching web site give you good information when you visit in Seoul.

>> Using the city tour bus and searching on web sites will  give you good information when you visit Seoul.

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