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Hello Jin Young. Thank you once again for this one. That\'s good to know that you are pursuing the dream you\'ve had since you were young. Robots and AI are said to be the future of human society. Good luck with this pursuit. Nothing is impossible. Enjoy your day!
- T. Beth
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When I was young, I like very much TV program to show robot character.
>>> When I was young, I was so into a TV program which had a robot character.
So I thought that if I grow up, I will be a engineer to make robot fighting against bad guys.
>>> So I thought that if I grow up, I will be an engineer who makes robots fighting against bad guys.
Now, I become engineer with major of electrical engineering.
>>> Now, I became an engineer majoring in electrical engineering.
But, I realize that making robot is very difficult work...
>>> But, I realized that making robots is a very difficult work.
So I study hard element of micro controller these day.
>>> So I am studying the elements of micro controller very hard these day.
I think I achieve somewhat my dream.
>>> I think I have somewhat achieved my dream.
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