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What are the advantages and disadvantages of having a lot of friends?
The advantage of having a lot of friends is that you can meet your friends more easily at the various places and time when you want. The disadvantage of having a lot of friends is that you should try to maintain a good relationship by contacting your friends regularly.
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The advantage of having a lot of friends is that you can meet your friends more easily at the various places and time when you want. The disadvantage of having a lot of friends is that you should try to maintain a good relationship by contacting your friends regularly.
>> The advantages of having a lot of friends is that you can meet your friends more easily whenever you want it. And the disadvantages of having a lot of friends is that you should try to maintain a good relationship by contacting your friends regularly.
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