HOMEWORK! ^^

Hi, [이름]!
Thanks for writing this exceptional essay. 

I loved reading it!

It is true that banning the use of plastic bags is a great way for our environment to recover. 

Anyhow, I hope you enjoy your holiday tomorrow. 

See you again on Thursday. 

~Teacher Charry :)   

I\'m glad to hear that my sentences have improved.

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Teacher,tomorrow is Liberation Day in Korea!

>> Teacher, tomorrow is Liberation Day in Korea!
It\'s a national holiday to celebrate Korea\'s liberation from Japan in 1945 and to celebrate the establishment of the Korean government.

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I will restore my health by remembering that meaning again.

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See you on Thursday.:D
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These days, plastic bags, which were free, have been changed to fees.

>> These days, plastic bags, which used to be free are now being charged for some fees.

At first, I doubted what was going on.

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Plastic bags are easy to find around and easy to use.

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However, it takes 20 to 100 years for one of these plastic bags to completely disappear.

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When incinerated, class 1 carcinogens are generated.

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Also recently, even the whale that died after eating plastic bags.

>> Also recently, even a whale died after eating plastic bags.
Eating seafood grown in the sea could threaten human life.

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Therefore, disposable plastic bags are the main culprit of serious environmental pollution.

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I think reducing plastic bags is a way for the environment, oceans, and for humans and the Earth.

>> I think reducing plastic bags is a way for the environment, oceans, for humans and the Earth to heal.
It may be difficult, but I think we should ban it for everyone.

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