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If i could change one thing about me, i would change a bad habit to me.
>>If I could change one thing about me, I would change a bad habit of mine.
A bad habbit i have is bitting my nail. When i was seven year old, i like to bit a nail. My mother worried about my habbit, but i don\'t care.
>> A bad habit I have is biting my nail. When I was seven years old, I like to bite a nail. My mother was worried about my habbit, but I don\'t care.
As i grow up, i feel shame about bitting a nail. It seems like child(?)
>> As I grow up, I feel shame about biting my nail. It seems like childish.
But i could\'t stop it. Who can stop my bad habbit?
>> But I couldn\'t stop it. Who can stop my bad habit?
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>> But I couldn\'t stop it. Who can stop a bad habit?
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