homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
ESSAY:
What do you want to learn? I want to learn the dance!!!!!! Because dance Is very very fun !! and It makes happy !!!~ ^^
강사 첨삭
Hello Elsa!!!
You were very good awhile ago. Keep it up and you can be good in speaking the English language.
God bless!!!!
T. Jeny
ESSAY:
What do you want to learn?
>>correct
I want to learn the dance!!!!!! Because dance Is very very fun !! and It makes happy !!!~ ^^
>>I want to learn how to dance!!!!!! Because dancing is fun and it makes me happy !!!~ ^^
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