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Hello Jin Young! Thank you for this. I think whenever we are in a difficult situation, significant others play a big role in dealing with it. We need someone to lean on, so they say. You\'re right, they don\'t always have to say anything or give you the best advise. Just listening to you voicing out about your problem could help a lot. I hope you have those people around you. Good luck today!
-T. Beth
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When I face difficult situation, I usually act two step for dealing with situation.
>>> When I face a difficult situation, I usually do two steps to deal with it.
First, I shout or inculcate proverbs that have proper advice in this situation.
>>> First, I shout or look into inspiring proverbs that could apply in this situation.
If It do not work well, I go to next step.
>>> If it doesn\'t work, I go to the next step.
>> OR: If it does not work, I proceed to the next step.
Second, I call or meet friends in order to talk about my situation.
>>> CORRECT.
Although they can\'t tell me about solution, it is relief to me to tell friends about my situation.
>>> Although they can\'t give me a solution, it is a relief to tell them about my situation.
I think it is not always answer to give solution to another.
>>> I think it is not always an answer to give a solution to another person.
>>> OR: I think giving an advise to someone does not always solve the problem.
Sometimes just listening to other person\'s situation is really helpful to them.
>>> Sometimes, just listening to the other person\'s situation is really helpful to them.
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