homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello Jake!
Thank you for doing your homework! You did really well! Keep it up and have a wonderful day.
~~Teacher Kate
1. I think there are lots of ways to enjoy the vacation.
>>>CORRECT!
OR>>>There are many ways to make your vacation a memorable one.
2. However, I like to spending it on the beach.
>>>However, I like spending it on the beach.
3. First of all, I like beaches.
>>>CORRECT!
OR>>>One of the main reasons is that I like beaches.
4. I like to see the beautiful seen of the shore.
>>>I like seeing the beautiful scene of the shore.
5. I like to listen to the sound of the tide.
>>>CORRECT!
OR>>>I like listening to the sound of the waves.
6. I like to eat and drink delicious food and drinks beside the shore.
>>>CORRECT!
OR>>>I like eating and drinking on the shore.
7. That is why I prefer to go to east southern asia during my vacation.
>>>That is why I prefer to go to southeastern Asia during my vacation.
8. Those countries have beautiful beaches and also great resorts.
>>>CORRECT!
OR>>>Those countries have some of the most beautiful beaches and resorts in the world.
9. I will visit them soon or later.
>>>I will visit them sooner or later.
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