homework

2018-08-16 · 첨삭 강사 Kate

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HOMEWORK: What would your dream vacation be like? I think there are lots of ways to enjoy the vacation. However, I like to spending it on the beach. First of all, I like beaches. I like to see the beautiful seen of the shore. I like to listen to the sound of the tide. I like to eat and drink delicious food and drinks beside the shore. That is why I prefer to go to east southern asia during my vacation. Those countries have beautiful beaches and also great resorts. I will visit them soon or later.

강사 첨삭

Hello Jake!

Thank you for doing your homework! You did really well! Keep it up and have a wonderful day.

~~Teacher Kate


1. I think there are lots of ways to enjoy the vacation.

>>>CORRECT!

OR>>>There are many ways to make your vacation a memorable one.

2. However, I like to spending it on the beach.

>>>However, I like spending it on the beach.

3. First of all, I like beaches.

>>>CORRECT!

OR>>>One of the main reasons is that I like beaches.

4. I like to see the beautiful seen of the shore.

>>>I like seeing the beautiful scene of the shore.

5. I like to listen to the sound of the tide.

>>>CORRECT!

OR>>>I like listening to the sound of the waves.

6. I like to eat and drink delicious food and drinks beside the shore.

>>>CORRECT!

OR>>>I like eating and drinking on the shore.

7. That is why I prefer to go to east southern asia during my vacation.

>>>That is why I prefer to go to southeastern Asia during my vacation.

8. Those countries have beautiful beaches and also great resorts.

>>>CORRECT!

OR>>>Those countries have some of the most beautiful beaches and resorts in the world.

9. I will visit them soon or later.

>>>I will visit them sooner or later.

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